ALLIE ALL ALONG: The Cover Story

My second picture book, ALLIE ALL ALONG, is now available wherever books are sold! Many thanks to my agent, Emily Mitchell, editor Eliza Berkowitz & art director Irene Vandervoort for helping to make this book the best it could be.

Allie All Along cover

On the surface, the story is about toddler temper tantrums . . . but underneath, it’s about frustration over not having control over things that happen in your life . . . as well as finding ways to regain some control over challenges that seem beyond your abilities.  It was inspired by the relationship between my two girls, and all the ways that we work together to shake off the worst of our angry layers when our feelings get too big.

Just like for my first book, THE BREAKING NEWS, there were tons of different iterations of the title and the cover before the final versions went to print.

Here are some early cover sketches . . .

cover concepts

. . .and some mocked up cover options that I sent to my editor & art director at Sterling Publishing – Eliza Berkowitz & Irene Vandervoort (after we decided to change the title from original THE ANGRY LAYERS to the final ALLIE ALL ALONG) . . .

cover concepts

. . .and here’s a small sampling of the other titles we had considered along the way:

UNDER THE ANGRY, IN THERE ALL ALONG, THE CRAYON LAYERS, UNDER ALL THE LAYERS, HOW TO SHED THE LAYERS, DEEP DOWN BELOW, HOW TO GET ALLIE OUT, ALLIE AT THE CORE, ALLIE UNDERNEATH, THE CRAYON CRISIS, THE CRAYON INCIDENT, THE BROKEN CRAYON, WHEN THE BLUE CRAYON BROKE . . . plus so, so many more.

Together, Eliza, Irene & I decided that we wanted to focus on the big feelings and the relationship between the siblings. It was difficult to find a balance for the cover illustration that didn’t give away too much about who Allie really is, but eventually Irene mocked up the following image using parts of illustrations from the interior:

mockup from IreneI redrew the characters for the cover, and then we went through a series of changes to adjust the Allie’s expression:

 

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…. not too obnoxious …
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…not too sad…
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…but some combination of that leave-me-alone arm crossing/back turning, plus some angry eyebrows, and sticking out her tongue again for good measure. The final image has one further adjustment over this version – I adjusted Allie’s eyes to look back up toward her brother, as if a implying a tiny, reluctant ask for help.

We even considered a few different treatments for the book’s spine. . .

spine options

And I was super pleased with the final version – especially since we were able to have separate illustrations for the dust jacket & the cover!

Photo Aug 13, 10 14 14 AM

For those of you in the Boston area, I’ll be reading ALLIE ALL ALONG at the Brookline Booksmith on Sunday, August 26th at 10:30 am – hope to see you there!

2 Comments on “ALLIE ALL ALONG: The Cover Story

  1. t’s an eye-opener how much work goes into a special children’s book. Before the week is out, I’m going to get a copy for my friend Cyndie’s grandson who just turned 4. I was telling her about it, and she was very interested.

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